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[2023/ 12/ 2] The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and Art in the UK in 2007.

【主体段分段】：按照图分段

Body 1：employment + working and studying

Body 2：其余三个类别

【开首段】

The bar chart compares the choices of graduates from Arts and Physics in Britain for the year 2007.

【空洞段】

Overall, students majoring in physics outnumbered those from art among all the given destinations. The largest gap between these two groups of graduates could be found in employment.

想路重点：

- 所有选拔中齐是physics>art

- Employment中art和physics的差距最大

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatemployment was the most favorable option for graduates — 35% of the physics majors and 25% of the students who majored in art decided to seek employment.By contrast, for both majors, only less than 10% of the students chose to work and study, making this choice the least attractive one.

想路重点：

- 选拔employment的东说念主数最多（physics有35%，Art有25%）

- 两个专科毕业生中选拔work and study的东说念主数最少，<10%

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【Body 2】

We can also see thatcontinuous study and training was chosen by 20% of students who studied physics and 15% of those from art.A similar difference could be foundin unemployment, where the proportion of physics graduates(15%)slightly outnumberedstudents with a degree in art.However,roughly the same percentages ofstudents from both majors made other decisions, with the figure of roughly 8%.

想路重点：

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- further training and study：physics--20%，art--15%

- unemployment有访佛的差距

- others：art和physics数据相同--简陋8%